Exercise 5
1. No
2. About Eleanar Roosevelt’s convictions that made her to become an outstanding humanitarian activist.
3. It gives a positive view of her profile. She’s promoter of the declaration of human rights in the UN.
4. She regarded the Universal Declaration as her greatest accomplishment.
5. She’s an idealist and tireless person in humanitarian movement.
Exercise 6
1. Her childhood.
2. The similarities are describing her as one of an outstanding humanatarian reformist and leader. The differences is, the first one explains her career background the second tells her life in general and chronogical way.
3. The encyclopedia, because the writing of encyclopedia seems more objective, disregarding the author’s opinion and comment.
4. The encyclopedia, because it’s more brief and complete.
5. The web page, because it’s more practical.
Showing posts with label Exercise 5 and Exercise 6. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Exercise 5 and Exercise 6. Show all posts
Monday, 5 April 2010
Saturday, 3 April 2010
Dian Khoirun Nikmah [2201406525]
EXERCISE 5
1. Exactly yes. This passage tells me about her track record in her life.
2. This passage is about Eleanor Roosevelt’s good characteristics and award that had got.
3. Both of them. The positive impression is the most point of this passage that she is a great person, modesty (paragraph 3), brave (paragraph 2), intellectual, social, concern in humanity etc. Her dedication in many aspects of life are really showed by this passage too. Only one negative impression of her that is in seventh paragraph tells us about her way in giving comment of the length meeting bay emotionally.
4. She felt so so because her nature style as modest woman even in her declaration advise to be modest women. It was one of her motivation to be greater. Her struggling in human rights has not finished yet at that time.
5. Based on the passage she is great, intellectual, brave and modest. It will better if I know her by myself (hm..).
EXERCISE 6
1. It tells us about her biography from her born till died. She was born on October, 11 1884 and died on November 7 1962. Many careers that she made are also told in this passage.
2. The two passages are same about the content and different in the way of delivering.
3. Her family. By knowing it we will know her life and her track record. Every reader will learn and may be continue her project.
4. Her track record and her personal independence. We can learn about her track record and easier to understand.
5. The encyclopedia entry where based on the pint and easier to understand.
1. Exactly yes. This passage tells me about her track record in her life.
2. This passage is about Eleanor Roosevelt’s good characteristics and award that had got.
3. Both of them. The positive impression is the most point of this passage that she is a great person, modesty (paragraph 3), brave (paragraph 2), intellectual, social, concern in humanity etc. Her dedication in many aspects of life are really showed by this passage too. Only one negative impression of her that is in seventh paragraph tells us about her way in giving comment of the length meeting bay emotionally.
4. She felt so so because her nature style as modest woman even in her declaration advise to be modest women. It was one of her motivation to be greater. Her struggling in human rights has not finished yet at that time.
5. Based on the passage she is great, intellectual, brave and modest. It will better if I know her by myself (hm..).
EXERCISE 6
1. It tells us about her biography from her born till died. She was born on October, 11 1884 and died on November 7 1962. Many careers that she made are also told in this passage.
2. The two passages are same about the content and different in the way of delivering.
3. Her family. By knowing it we will know her life and her track record. Every reader will learn and may be continue her project.
4. Her track record and her personal independence. We can learn about her track record and easier to understand.
5. The encyclopedia entry where based on the pint and easier to understand.
Friday, 2 April 2010
Eva Agusti Purnarini [2201409086]
Exercise 5
1. Does this passage give you information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood?
No, it doesn’t.
2. What is most of this passage about?
This passage is most about Eleanor Roosevelt’s life.
3. Does this passage give a positive or negative impression of Mrs. Roosevelt? How can you tell?
This passage gives us a positive impression because it talks about her career and her accomplishment.
4. What did Mrs. Roosevelt feel was greatest accomplishment?
Mrs. Roosevelt felt was her greatest accomplishment when she worked in Declaration of Human Right.
5. What can you tell about Mrs. Roosevelt as a person?
Mrs. Roosevelt is an influential person, I guess.
Exercise 6
1. What information does the encyclopedia entry add to what you already know about Mrs. Roosevelt?
Encyclopedia entry adds much information about her childhood that she had an intensely unhappy childhood.
2. In which ways are two passages similar? In which ways are they different?
Similarity in the two passages is in containing. Both of them explain about Eleanor Roosevelt’s life.
And the different is the way of presenting information that will to inform to reader. In the second passage, the information arranged systematically and divided into several parts and each part there is subtitle than make the readers easy to understand than the first passage.
3. If you were writing a report on Mrs. Roosevelt’s life, which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
If I was writing a report on Mrs. Roosevelt life, it is more useful if I use the encyclopedia entry one, because I will get more detail information from her childhood until her lately life, and her achievements also.
4. If you were writing a report about the United Nations, which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
5. Which is easier to skim, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
I think, the passage which easier to skim is the encyclopedia entry, because it contains all life’s aspect, more detail, and it is divided into each aspect so that more easier to skim.
1. Does this passage give you information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood?
No, it doesn’t.
2. What is most of this passage about?
This passage is most about Eleanor Roosevelt’s life.
3. Does this passage give a positive or negative impression of Mrs. Roosevelt? How can you tell?
This passage gives us a positive impression because it talks about her career and her accomplishment.
4. What did Mrs. Roosevelt feel was greatest accomplishment?
Mrs. Roosevelt felt was her greatest accomplishment when she worked in Declaration of Human Right.
5. What can you tell about Mrs. Roosevelt as a person?
Mrs. Roosevelt is an influential person, I guess.
Exercise 6
1. What information does the encyclopedia entry add to what you already know about Mrs. Roosevelt?Encyclopedia entry adds much information about her childhood that she had an intensely unhappy childhood.
2. In which ways are two passages similar? In which ways are they different?
Similarity in the two passages is in containing. Both of them explain about Eleanor Roosevelt’s life.
And the different is the way of presenting information that will to inform to reader. In the second passage, the information arranged systematically and divided into several parts and each part there is subtitle than make the readers easy to understand than the first passage.
3. If you were writing a report on Mrs. Roosevelt’s life, which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
If I was writing a report on Mrs. Roosevelt life, it is more useful if I use the encyclopedia entry one, because I will get more detail information from her childhood until her lately life, and her achievements also.
4. If you were writing a report about the United Nations, which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
5. Which is easier to skim, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
I think, the passage which easier to skim is the encyclopedia entry, because it contains all life’s aspect, more detail, and it is divided into each aspect so that more easier to skim.
A'in Ratna Mulyani [2201409058]
Exercise 5
1. No, it doesn't. This passage doesn't give us information about Eleanor Roosevelt's childhood.
2. This passage tells us most about Eleanor Roosevelt's participation and appreciation of the United Nation's Commission on Human Rights.
3. This passage gives us a positive impression of Mrs. Roosevelt.
For example we can see in paragraph 2: She was, without doubt, the most influential member of the United Nation's Commission on Human Rights.
In paragraph 3: Her inthusiasm for her work at the United Nation was rooted in her humanitarian convictions and her steady faith in human dignity and worth.
4. The greatest accomplishment of Mrs. Roosevelt was Universal Declaration of Human Rights.
The delegates to the Commission on Human Rights elected Eleanor Roosevelt their chairperson.
5. Mrs. Roosevelt was an astute, accomplished,and intelligent woman, thoroughly familiar with the world of political negotiation.
Exercise 6
1. The encyclopedia entry adds more information about Eleanor Roosevelt.
Not only her participation and appreciation in the United Nation, in the politic, but also gives us information about her biography, her childhood from she was a child until she passed away.
2. These two passages give us information about Eleanor Roosevelt.
the differences are:
=> passage 1 is taken from internet or webpage. It just tells us about Mrs.Roosevelt impression in United Nation, and her accomplishment for Human Rights.
=> passage 2 is taken from encyclopedia. It tells us not only about her accomplishment but also tells us about her biography.
3. If I were writing about Eleanor Roosevelt's life, the source that would be more useful is encyclopedia.
Because it gives me much information about her biography. it tells us her life from she was childhood until she died.
4. If I were writing a report about United Nations, the source that would be more useful is from internet or webpage.
Becausei it gives me much information about United Nation. Besides, it also tells us about the story and the development of United Nation.
5. Its easier to skim the encyclopedia entry than the web page.
Because encyclopedia entry is written more systematically than the web page. And the information in the encyclopedia is well organized.
But, when we try to skim the web page, we got difficulties baecause it's written like a story. And we got difficult to find the main sentence in each part.
1. No, it doesn't. This passage doesn't give us information about Eleanor Roosevelt's childhood.
2. This passage tells us most about Eleanor Roosevelt's participation and appreciation of the United Nation's Commission on Human Rights.
3. This passage gives us a positive impression of Mrs. Roosevelt.
For example we can see in paragraph 2: She was, without doubt, the most influential member of the United Nation's Commission on Human Rights.
In paragraph 3: Her inthusiasm for her work at the United Nation was rooted in her humanitarian convictions and her steady faith in human dignity and worth.
4. The greatest accomplishment of Mrs. Roosevelt was Universal Declaration of Human Rights.
The delegates to the Commission on Human Rights elected Eleanor Roosevelt their chairperson.
5. Mrs. Roosevelt was an astute, accomplished,and intelligent woman, thoroughly familiar with the world of political negotiation.
Exercise 6
1. The encyclopedia entry adds more information about Eleanor Roosevelt.
Not only her participation and appreciation in the United Nation, in the politic, but also gives us information about her biography, her childhood from she was a child until she passed away.
2. These two passages give us information about Eleanor Roosevelt.
the differences are:
=> passage 1 is taken from internet or webpage. It just tells us about Mrs.Roosevelt impression in United Nation, and her accomplishment for Human Rights.
=> passage 2 is taken from encyclopedia. It tells us not only about her accomplishment but also tells us about her biography.
3. If I were writing about Eleanor Roosevelt's life, the source that would be more useful is encyclopedia.
Because it gives me much information about her biography. it tells us her life from she was childhood until she died.
4. If I were writing a report about United Nations, the source that would be more useful is from internet or webpage.
Becausei it gives me much information about United Nation. Besides, it also tells us about the story and the development of United Nation.
5. Its easier to skim the encyclopedia entry than the web page.
Because encyclopedia entry is written more systematically than the web page. And the information in the encyclopedia is well organized.
But, when we try to skim the web page, we got difficulties baecause it's written like a story. And we got difficult to find the main sentence in each part.
Noviana Sadam Dewanti [2201409034]
Exercise 5
1. Does this passage give you information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood?
2. What is most of this passage about?
3. Does this passage give a positive or negative impression of Mrs. Roosevelt? How can you tell?
4. What did Mrs. Roosevelt feel was greatest accomplishment?
5. What can you tell about Mrs. Roosevelt as a person?
Answer :
1. No, it doesn’t.
2. It is most about Mrs. Roosevelt’s career accomplishment track, especially in human rights and politics.
3. I think it gives a positive impression of Mrs. Roosevelt. We can know it by analyzing the main idea in each paragraph which mentions her great role and accomplishment for people.
4. By getting it, she feels having a duty as one of ambassador for the common man and woman.
5. According to me, she can be an aspirator for another. People can learn her behaviors, life-striving and accomplishments.
Exercise 6
1. What information does the encyclopedia entry add to what you already know about Mrs. Roosevelt?
2. In which ways are two passages similar? In which ways are they different?
3. If you were writing a report on Mrs. Roosevelt’s life, which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
4. If you were writing a report about the United Nations, which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
5. Which is easier to skim, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
Answer:
1. It adds Mrs. Roosevelt’s life journey, political activities, contributions, and achievements especially in human rights.
2. »The two passages have similarity in the general information about Mrs. Roosevelt’s life history and contributions.
»The two passages have difference in how to present the information about Mrs. Roosevelt. In first passage, the information was arranged in article form that looks like a story and can be expressed more flexible. In other hand, the second one was arranged in pointing form (giving bolded subtitle in front of paragraph and exposing just the most Mrs. Roosevelt’s data).
3. If I were writing a report on Mrs. Roosevelt’s life, I will choose web page because I can make it more interesting by arranging it freely likes as a short story, without changing the real data.
4. If I were writing a report about United Nations, I will choose encyclopedia entry because it contains more points and fact information.
5. In my opinion, it’s easier to skim encyclopedia entry because we can quickly find the general ideas in the bolded subtitles.
1. Does this passage give you information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood?
2. What is most of this passage about?
3. Does this passage give a positive or negative impression of Mrs. Roosevelt? How can you tell?
4. What did Mrs. Roosevelt feel was greatest accomplishment?
5. What can you tell about Mrs. Roosevelt as a person?
Answer :
1. No, it doesn’t.
2. It is most about Mrs. Roosevelt’s career accomplishment track, especially in human rights and politics.
3. I think it gives a positive impression of Mrs. Roosevelt. We can know it by analyzing the main idea in each paragraph which mentions her great role and accomplishment for people.
4. By getting it, she feels having a duty as one of ambassador for the common man and woman.
5. According to me, she can be an aspirator for another. People can learn her behaviors, life-striving and accomplishments.
Exercise 6
1. What information does the encyclopedia entry add to what you already know about Mrs. Roosevelt?
2. In which ways are two passages similar? In which ways are they different?
3. If you were writing a report on Mrs. Roosevelt’s life, which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
4. If you were writing a report about the United Nations, which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
5. Which is easier to skim, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
Answer:
1. It adds Mrs. Roosevelt’s life journey, political activities, contributions, and achievements especially in human rights.
2. »The two passages have similarity in the general information about Mrs. Roosevelt’s life history and contributions.
»The two passages have difference in how to present the information about Mrs. Roosevelt. In first passage, the information was arranged in article form that looks like a story and can be expressed more flexible. In other hand, the second one was arranged in pointing form (giving bolded subtitle in front of paragraph and exposing just the most Mrs. Roosevelt’s data).
3. If I were writing a report on Mrs. Roosevelt’s life, I will choose web page because I can make it more interesting by arranging it freely likes as a short story, without changing the real data.
4. If I were writing a report about United Nations, I will choose encyclopedia entry because it contains more points and fact information.
5. In my opinion, it’s easier to skim encyclopedia entry because we can quickly find the general ideas in the bolded subtitles.
Dwi Iswahyuni [2201409028]
Exercise 5
1. No, that passage doesn’t give me information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood.
2. Most of that passage is about Eleanor Roosevelt’s accomplishment or her achievements in the struggle for human rights.
3. This passage gives a positive impression of Mrs. Roosevelt. I can say that because in this passage, it describes about Mrs. Roosevelt’s greatest accomplishment and precious things that she had done ( such as in the first paragraph).
4. Mrs. Roosevelt felt that the Universal Declaration of Human Rights was her greatest accomplishment.
5. Mrs. Roosevelt (as a person) is an independent woman. She is also a care person. Not only it, she is also smart, she has great spirit that will not give up to realize what she wants.
Exercise 6
1. The encyclopedia entry adds information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood and more about Mrs. Roosevelt’s personal life ( from her childhood until she passed away).
2. The two passages are similar in giving information about Mrs. Roosevelt’s accomplishment ( both of them tell about Mrs. Roosevelt’s accomplishment in the human right struggling).
The difference between both of them: (1) the second passage tells us more detail about Mrs. Roosevelt’s personal life ( for example: her childhood). (2) The source of the first passage is from internet web page, while the second passage is from encyclopedia entry ( the information is arranged more systematically).
3. If I were writing a report on Mrs. Roosevelt’s life, the source that would be more useful is encyclopedia entry because it describes more detail about Mrs. Roosevelt’s life, starting from her childhood until she died.
4. If I were writing a report about the United Nations, the source would be more useful is the web page because from it, I can get more information about the United States, such as the establishment of the United Nations.
5. The encyclopedia entry is easier to skim because it is more systematic and there are subtitles ( the bold words in that passage) that can make us easier to understand the contain of the passage.
1. No, that passage doesn’t give me information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood.
2. Most of that passage is about Eleanor Roosevelt’s accomplishment or her achievements in the struggle for human rights.
3. This passage gives a positive impression of Mrs. Roosevelt. I can say that because in this passage, it describes about Mrs. Roosevelt’s greatest accomplishment and precious things that she had done ( such as in the first paragraph).
4. Mrs. Roosevelt felt that the Universal Declaration of Human Rights was her greatest accomplishment.
5. Mrs. Roosevelt (as a person) is an independent woman. She is also a care person. Not only it, she is also smart, she has great spirit that will not give up to realize what she wants.
Exercise 6
1. The encyclopedia entry adds information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood and more about Mrs. Roosevelt’s personal life ( from her childhood until she passed away).
2. The two passages are similar in giving information about Mrs. Roosevelt’s accomplishment ( both of them tell about Mrs. Roosevelt’s accomplishment in the human right struggling).
The difference between both of them: (1) the second passage tells us more detail about Mrs. Roosevelt’s personal life ( for example: her childhood). (2) The source of the first passage is from internet web page, while the second passage is from encyclopedia entry ( the information is arranged more systematically).
3. If I were writing a report on Mrs. Roosevelt’s life, the source that would be more useful is encyclopedia entry because it describes more detail about Mrs. Roosevelt’s life, starting from her childhood until she died.
4. If I were writing a report about the United Nations, the source would be more useful is the web page because from it, I can get more information about the United States, such as the establishment of the United Nations.
5. The encyclopedia entry is easier to skim because it is more systematic and there are subtitles ( the bold words in that passage) that can make us easier to understand the contain of the passage.
Thursday, 1 April 2010
Rini Dwijayanti [2201409040]
EXERCISE 5
- No,it doesn’t.
- Most of this passage is about Eleanor Roosevelt’s participation and appreciation for human rights and all about humanity.
- This passage gives positives impression of Mrs. Roosevelt because it tells us about her paces as the first lady who gives her cares for human rights. She also becomes a cornerstone in the struggle for human rights and fundamental freedoms for everyone everywhere.
- Mrs. Roosevelt felt that the declaration of human rights was her greatest accomplishment in her life.
- I can tell that she is an accomplished, astute, and intelligent woman.
EXERCISE 6
- The encyclopedia entry adds more about her early life, her personal independence, her family, and her accomplishment.
- The 2 passages have similarity because they both tell about one person,and they are different because the first passage tells just about Mrs. Roosevelt’s accomplishment,but the second passage tells about not only her accomplishment but also her own life.
- I would use the encyclopedia entry because i can add more about her early life,her personal independence,and her family,not only her accomplishments.
- I would use web page because I could write all of her achievements.
- The encyclopedia entry is easier to skim because there will be easy to distinguise the part of the passage.
Nur Aininna [2201409070]
Exercise 5
1. No , the passage doesn’t give me any information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood.
2. The passage is mostly about the biography of Eleanor Roosevelt , about what she did and her success
in doing that.
3. The passage gives a positive impression of Mrs. Roosevelt , it is shown from the sentences written
which talks about her modesty , her enthusiasm in human right , her optimism , her success in politics, and also the achievements she got.
4. What Mrs. Roosevelt felt about her greatest achievement was optimism and a determination.
5. As a person , I can say that Mrs. Roosevelt was a great , smart , and modest woman who had huge
contribution s in struggling for human dignity and worth. She’s a couragious person who was dare to
struggle for what she believed was right.
Exercise 6
1) The encyclopedia entry adds some informations about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood and her family.
2) The two passages are similar for both are talking about the biography of an inspiring figure Eleanor
Roosevelt. But they are different for its contents. The first text didn’t tell us about the childhood life of
Eleanor . But the second text did.
3) If I were writing a report on Mrs. Roosevelt’s life , the encyclopedia entry would be a more useful
source for me , because usually the quality of the information in the internet is below what we found in
print.
4) If I were writing a report about US , The web page would be better to choose for it’s completed with
some pictures or maps.
5) It’s easier to skim rather than reading such a thick encyclopedia or looking on a web page , because
by skimming we don’t have to read all the words written that might probably get us confused. We just
need to find out the key words that answers the questions in our mind.
1. No , the passage doesn’t give me any information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood.
2. The passage is mostly about the biography of Eleanor Roosevelt , about what she did and her success
in doing that.
3. The passage gives a positive impression of Mrs. Roosevelt , it is shown from the sentences written
which talks about her modesty , her enthusiasm in human right , her optimism , her success in politics, and also the achievements she got.
4. What Mrs. Roosevelt felt about her greatest achievement was optimism and a determination.
5. As a person , I can say that Mrs. Roosevelt was a great , smart , and modest woman who had huge
contribution s in struggling for human dignity and worth. She’s a couragious person who was dare to
struggle for what she believed was right.
Exercise 6
1) The encyclopedia entry adds some informations about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood and her family.
2) The two passages are similar for both are talking about the biography of an inspiring figure Eleanor
Roosevelt. But they are different for its contents. The first text didn’t tell us about the childhood life of
Eleanor . But the second text did.
3) If I were writing a report on Mrs. Roosevelt’s life , the encyclopedia entry would be a more useful
source for me , because usually the quality of the information in the internet is below what we found in
print.
4) If I were writing a report about US , The web page would be better to choose for it’s completed with
some pictures or maps.
5) It’s easier to skim rather than reading such a thick encyclopedia or looking on a web page , because
by skimming we don’t have to read all the words written that might probably get us confused. We just
need to find out the key words that answers the questions in our mind.
Sinta Arianti Siwi [2201409039]
Exercise 5
1. No, it does not give me information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood.
2. The most passage is about The Greatest Woman in the world (Eleanor Roosevelt) that the first woman who declares and introduces The Human’s Right to the world.
3. This passage gives a positive impression of Mrs. Roosevelt. We can see that she was the most influential member of the United Nations Commission on Human Rights. Her enthusiasm for her work at the United Nations was rooted in her humanitarian convictions and her steady faith in human dignity and worth.
4. Mrs. Roosevelt felt that her greatest accomplishment as the remarkable and greatest accomplishment in her life.
5. Mrs. Roosevelt was an intelligent person I’ve ever known. She was an enthusiastic person, an astute, accomplished, brilliant woman thoroughly familiar with the word political negotiation. She was not only optimist person, but also she had a big idea for the human life. Despite of that, Adlai Stevenson, once said of Eleanor Roosevelt, “She would rather light a candle than curse he darkness” and I’m on his side.
Exercise 6
1. The encyclopedia gives more information about Mrs. Roosevelt’s childhood (it includes the place, and the time she was born completely). It also gives me the entire of her life until she passed away.
2. The passage one and the passage two are similar in the explanation about Mrs. Roosevelt as the Greatest Woman through the world and her achievement. The differences are in the first passage described about the accomplishment of Mrs. Roosevelt in the Declaration on Human Rights generally. But in the second passage brought the information of the Mrs. Roosevelt’s life completely.
3. If I were writing a report on Mrs. Roosevelt‘s life, I prefer using the encyclopedia one, because the encyclopedia supply the details information about Mrs. Roosevelt’s life. Not only in the childhood, but also in the end of her life.
4. If I were writing a report about the United Nations, I would rather use the web one than an encyclopedia. A web opens the entire of the source widely. So that we can absorb the information and sources from it.
5. In my side, the encyclopedia is easier to skim. With many reasons, I will explain it one by one.
First, reading encyclopedia is the same as we read the text book or a story book.
Second, if we read the encyclopedia, we get the general idea.
Third, Reading a web likes reading only the opinion of the writers in the web, that sometimes the writer gave the wrong information about the information and he/ she doesn’t have the responsibility about that. All of that, reading a web is not the bad one also; it’s just giving another source besides encyclopedia.
1. No, it does not give me information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood.
2. The most passage is about The Greatest Woman in the world (Eleanor Roosevelt) that the first woman who declares and introduces The Human’s Right to the world.
3. This passage gives a positive impression of Mrs. Roosevelt. We can see that she was the most influential member of the United Nations Commission on Human Rights. Her enthusiasm for her work at the United Nations was rooted in her humanitarian convictions and her steady faith in human dignity and worth.
4. Mrs. Roosevelt felt that her greatest accomplishment as the remarkable and greatest accomplishment in her life.
5. Mrs. Roosevelt was an intelligent person I’ve ever known. She was an enthusiastic person, an astute, accomplished, brilliant woman thoroughly familiar with the word political negotiation. She was not only optimist person, but also she had a big idea for the human life. Despite of that, Adlai Stevenson, once said of Eleanor Roosevelt, “She would rather light a candle than curse he darkness” and I’m on his side.
Exercise 6
1. The encyclopedia gives more information about Mrs. Roosevelt’s childhood (it includes the place, and the time she was born completely). It also gives me the entire of her life until she passed away.
2. The passage one and the passage two are similar in the explanation about Mrs. Roosevelt as the Greatest Woman through the world and her achievement. The differences are in the first passage described about the accomplishment of Mrs. Roosevelt in the Declaration on Human Rights generally. But in the second passage brought the information of the Mrs. Roosevelt’s life completely.
3. If I were writing a report on Mrs. Roosevelt‘s life, I prefer using the encyclopedia one, because the encyclopedia supply the details information about Mrs. Roosevelt’s life. Not only in the childhood, but also in the end of her life.
4. If I were writing a report about the United Nations, I would rather use the web one than an encyclopedia. A web opens the entire of the source widely. So that we can absorb the information and sources from it.
5. In my side, the encyclopedia is easier to skim. With many reasons, I will explain it one by one.
First, reading encyclopedia is the same as we read the text book or a story book.
Second, if we read the encyclopedia, we get the general idea.
Third, Reading a web likes reading only the opinion of the writers in the web, that sometimes the writer gave the wrong information about the information and he/ she doesn’t have the responsibility about that. All of that, reading a web is not the bad one also; it’s just giving another source besides encyclopedia.
Wednesday, 31 March 2010
Zanar Kukuh Pribadi [2211409019]
Exercise 5
1. Does this passage give you information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood?
no, this passsage doesn't give me information about eleanor Roosevelt's childhood
2. What is most of this passage about?
this passage tells the story and achievement of Eleanor Roosevelt in the struggle for human rights in United Nation’s Commission.
3. Does this passage give a positive or a negative impression of Mrs. Roosevelt? How can you tell?
of course, this passage gives a positive impression of Mrs. Roosevelt. We can see that Mrs. Eleanor Roosevelt has influenced the united nation's commission about human rights. She is so smart like tihs passage tells. she is care about human rights.
4. What did Mrs. Roosevelt feel was her greatest accomplishment?
Mrs Roosevelt felt that the declaration of human rights was the greatest accomplishment through her life.
5. What can you tell about Mrs. Roosevelt as a person?
Mrs.Roosevelt is a strong woman. She has a beautiful and great dream and she know how to make it comes true. And the way of she reach her dream about human right was incredible.
Exercise 6
1. What information does the encyclopedia entry add to what you already know about Mrs. Roosevelt?
In this passage I get much information about Mrs. Roosevelt from childhood ‘till she is passed away.
2. In which ways are the two passages similar? In which ways are they different?
The both passages are similar in describing Mrs. Roosevelt and her establishment in Declaration of Human Rights. The differences between them is the web page focused on Mrs. Roosevelt’s role on United Nation. But the encyclopedia entry is focused on Mrs. Roosevelt life.
3. If you were writing a report on Mrs. Roosevelt’s life, which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
I prefer encyclopedia entry to the web, because of its complete information about Mrs. Roosevelt life.
4. If you were writing a report about the United Nations, which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
I choose web page because it describes more about United Nations.
5. Which is easier to skim, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
I think skimming on encyclopedia entry it is easier and clearer than web page. And more trustable I think, so we don’t need to doubt about the passage from it.
1. Does this passage give you information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood?
no, this passsage doesn't give me information about eleanor Roosevelt's childhood
2. What is most of this passage about?
this passage tells the story and achievement of Eleanor Roosevelt in the struggle for human rights in United Nation’s Commission.
3. Does this passage give a positive or a negative impression of Mrs. Roosevelt? How can you tell?
of course, this passage gives a positive impression of Mrs. Roosevelt. We can see that Mrs. Eleanor Roosevelt has influenced the united nation's commission about human rights. She is so smart like tihs passage tells. she is care about human rights.
4. What did Mrs. Roosevelt feel was her greatest accomplishment?
Mrs Roosevelt felt that the declaration of human rights was the greatest accomplishment through her life.
5. What can you tell about Mrs. Roosevelt as a person?
Mrs.Roosevelt is a strong woman. She has a beautiful and great dream and she know how to make it comes true. And the way of she reach her dream about human right was incredible.
Exercise 6
1. What information does the encyclopedia entry add to what you already know about Mrs. Roosevelt?
In this passage I get much information about Mrs. Roosevelt from childhood ‘till she is passed away.
2. In which ways are the two passages similar? In which ways are they different?
The both passages are similar in describing Mrs. Roosevelt and her establishment in Declaration of Human Rights. The differences between them is the web page focused on Mrs. Roosevelt’s role on United Nation. But the encyclopedia entry is focused on Mrs. Roosevelt life.
3. If you were writing a report on Mrs. Roosevelt’s life, which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
I prefer encyclopedia entry to the web, because of its complete information about Mrs. Roosevelt life.
4. If you were writing a report about the United Nations, which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
I choose web page because it describes more about United Nations.
5. Which is easier to skim, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
I think skimming on encyclopedia entry it is easier and clearer than web page. And more trustable I think, so we don’t need to doubt about the passage from it.
Yosie Syahfitra A. [2201409043]
Exercise 5
1. Does this passage give you information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood?
no,it doesn't. this passsage doesn't give me information about eleanor Roosevelt's childhood
2. What is most of this passage about?
this passage tells the story of Eleanor Roosevelt in the struggle for human rights in United Nation’s Commission.
3. Does this passage give a positive or a negative impression of Mrs. Roosevelt? How can you tell?
this passage gives a positive impression of Mrs. Roosevelt. we can see the good characteristics from Mrs.Eleanor Roosevelt that influence the united nation's commission about human rights. in this passage,you can also see how clever and smart she is. she is a good and hard working that always struggle for human rights.
4. What did Mrs. Roosevelt feel was her greatest accomplishment?
Mrs Roosevelt felt that the declaration of human rights was the greatest accomplishment for her.
5. What can you tell about Mrs. Roosevelt as a person?
Mrs.Roosevelt is good people and very smart. she is also a hard worker who defend human rights in her way. I think she is like Kartini who struggle for gender equality in Indonesia.
Exercise 6
1. What information does the encyclopedia entry add to what you already know about Mrs. Roosevelt?
the encyclopedia entry add gave me the information about Mrs.Roosevelt life. about her childhood,her parents,her personal life,until she died.
2. In which ways are the two passages similar? In which ways are they different?
both of the passages are similar in describe about Mrs.Eleanor Roosevelt especially in Eleanor Roosevelt ‘s accomplishment. but in passage two we can also found about Mrs. Elleanor personal life.
3. If you were writing a report on Mrs. Roosevelt’s life, which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
the encyclopedia entry is more useful rather than the web page. because in encyclopedia entry,we can also found Elleanor Roosevelt's personal life. and in the encyclopedia entry is have more detail.
4. If you were writing a report about the United Nations, which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
if i were writing a report about the United Nations i prefer used the web page source.because it has a lot of information about Elleanor Roosevelt's work.
5. Which is easier to skim, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
i choose encyclopedia entry,in encyclopedia entry,the information has already categorized and we can easy to understand if the content of information has already categorized.
1. Does this passage give you information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood?
no,it doesn't. this passsage doesn't give me information about eleanor Roosevelt's childhood
2. What is most of this passage about?
this passage tells the story of Eleanor Roosevelt in the struggle for human rights in United Nation’s Commission.
3. Does this passage give a positive or a negative impression of Mrs. Roosevelt? How can you tell?
this passage gives a positive impression of Mrs. Roosevelt. we can see the good characteristics from Mrs.Eleanor Roosevelt that influence the united nation's commission about human rights. in this passage,you can also see how clever and smart she is. she is a good and hard working that always struggle for human rights.
4. What did Mrs. Roosevelt feel was her greatest accomplishment?
Mrs Roosevelt felt that the declaration of human rights was the greatest accomplishment for her.
5. What can you tell about Mrs. Roosevelt as a person?
Mrs.Roosevelt is good people and very smart. she is also a hard worker who defend human rights in her way. I think she is like Kartini who struggle for gender equality in Indonesia.
Exercise 6
1. What information does the encyclopedia entry add to what you already know about Mrs. Roosevelt?
the encyclopedia entry add gave me the information about Mrs.Roosevelt life. about her childhood,her parents,her personal life,until she died.
2. In which ways are the two passages similar? In which ways are they different?
both of the passages are similar in describe about Mrs.Eleanor Roosevelt especially in Eleanor Roosevelt ‘s accomplishment. but in passage two we can also found about Mrs. Elleanor personal life.
3. If you were writing a report on Mrs. Roosevelt’s life, which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
the encyclopedia entry is more useful rather than the web page. because in encyclopedia entry,we can also found Elleanor Roosevelt's personal life. and in the encyclopedia entry is have more detail.
4. If you were writing a report about the United Nations, which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
if i were writing a report about the United Nations i prefer used the web page source.because it has a lot of information about Elleanor Roosevelt's work.
5. Which is easier to skim, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
i choose encyclopedia entry,in encyclopedia entry,the information has already categorized and we can easy to understand if the content of information has already categorized.
Aditya Rizkiyanto [2201409035]
Exercise 5
1. Does this passage give you information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood?
No, it doesn’t.
2. What is most of this passage about?
This passage mostly tells us about the great effort of Eleanor Roosevelt as the member of the United Nation’s Commission on Human Rights.
3. Does this passage give a positive or a negative impression of Mrs. Roosevelt? How can you tell?
Yes, it does. This passage give positive impression of Mrs. Roosevelt. From Declaration of Human Rights, people feel that there is the law that protect them all.
4. What did Mrs. Roosevelt feel was her greatest accomplishment?
Her greatest accomplished is she won International Respect and admiration in her role as first lady to President Franklin D. Roosevelt, Elanor Roosevelt’s work on the Universal Declaration of Human Rights.
5. What can you tell about Mrs. Roosevelt as a person?
She was an astute, accomplished and intelligent woman.
Exercise 6
1. What information does the encyclopedia entry add to what you already know about Mrs. Roosevelt?
The encyclopedia give me some information about her life.
2. In which ways are the two passages similar? In which ways are they different?
The both passages are similar when describing Mrs. Roosevelt and her establishment in Declaration of Human Rights. The differences between them is that the web page focus on Mrs. Roosevelt’s role on United Nation then the encyclopedia entry is focused on Mrs. Roosevelt life.
3. If you were writing a report on Mrs. Roosevelt’s life, which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
I will choose encyclopedia entry because of its complete information about Mrs. Roosevelt life.
4. If you were writing a report about the United Nations, which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
I will choose web page because it describes more about United Nations.
5. Which is easier to skim, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
I think skimming on encyclopedia entry is easier because we can know everything from it.
1. Does this passage give you information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood?
No, it doesn’t.
2. What is most of this passage about?
This passage mostly tells us about the great effort of Eleanor Roosevelt as the member of the United Nation’s Commission on Human Rights.
3. Does this passage give a positive or a negative impression of Mrs. Roosevelt? How can you tell?
Yes, it does. This passage give positive impression of Mrs. Roosevelt. From Declaration of Human Rights, people feel that there is the law that protect them all.
4. What did Mrs. Roosevelt feel was her greatest accomplishment?
Her greatest accomplished is she won International Respect and admiration in her role as first lady to President Franklin D. Roosevelt, Elanor Roosevelt’s work on the Universal Declaration of Human Rights.
5. What can you tell about Mrs. Roosevelt as a person?
She was an astute, accomplished and intelligent woman.
Exercise 6
1. What information does the encyclopedia entry add to what you already know about Mrs. Roosevelt?
The encyclopedia give me some information about her life.
2. In which ways are the two passages similar? In which ways are they different?
The both passages are similar when describing Mrs. Roosevelt and her establishment in Declaration of Human Rights. The differences between them is that the web page focus on Mrs. Roosevelt’s role on United Nation then the encyclopedia entry is focused on Mrs. Roosevelt life.
3. If you were writing a report on Mrs. Roosevelt’s life, which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
I will choose encyclopedia entry because of its complete information about Mrs. Roosevelt life.
4. If you were writing a report about the United Nations, which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
I will choose web page because it describes more about United Nations.
5. Which is easier to skim, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
I think skimming on encyclopedia entry is easier because we can know everything from it.
Aries Shofiana [2201409114]
Exercise 5
1. No, it doesn’t. I don’t get any information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood in this passage.
2. Most of this passage tells about the Eleanor Roosevelt’s role in her struggle for human rights and fundamental freedoms for everyone everywhere. Her role in the Declaration of Human Rights made her became the most influential member of the United Nation’s Commission on Human Rights though she wasn’t a scholar or an expert on international law but her enthusiasm for her work in the United Nations was rooted in her humanitarian convictions and her steady faith in human dignity and worth. She was also elected became the leader of the Commission on Human Rights by the delegates.
3. Yes, it does. This passage gives a positive impression of Mrs. Roosevelt because Mrs. Roosevelt is a woman who struggling for the human rights, for the equal justice, equal opportunity, and equal dignity without discrimination. Her role in the United Nation’s Commission on Human Rights, her leadership of the Commission on Human Rights was the great achievement.
4. Eleanor Roosevelt’s personal sense of accomplishment with the finished declaration was unparalleled in her life.
5. Mrs. Roosevelt is a characteristic modesty woman. She is an astute, accomplished, and intelligent woman.
Exercise 6
1. In this passage I get many more information about Mrs. Roosevelt especially the early life of Mrs. Roosevelt which hasn’t been studied yet in the previous passage on page 48.
2. These two passages are similar in explaining about Mrs. Roosevelt life, but in passage 2 which its source is from encyclopedia entry give us more detail life of Mrs. Roosevelt.
3. If I were a writing a report on Mrs. Roosevelt’s life, the source that would be most useful for me is the source that is come from the encyclopedia entry. Because if I use the encyclopedia entry I will get many more information about Mrs. Roosevelt’s life. It gives us information that can’t be found in the web page, such as the early life of Mrs. Roosevelt’s life.
4. If I were a writing a report about the United Nations, the source that would be most useful for me is the source that is come from web page. Because in this passage explain more detail about United Nation in struggling for the human rights and fundamental freedoms for everyone in everywhere.
5. I think that the encyclopedia entry is easier to skim than the web page because the encyclopedia entry has good arrangement in its explanation.
1. No, it doesn’t. I don’t get any information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood in this passage.
2. Most of this passage tells about the Eleanor Roosevelt’s role in her struggle for human rights and fundamental freedoms for everyone everywhere. Her role in the Declaration of Human Rights made her became the most influential member of the United Nation’s Commission on Human Rights though she wasn’t a scholar or an expert on international law but her enthusiasm for her work in the United Nations was rooted in her humanitarian convictions and her steady faith in human dignity and worth. She was also elected became the leader of the Commission on Human Rights by the delegates.
3. Yes, it does. This passage gives a positive impression of Mrs. Roosevelt because Mrs. Roosevelt is a woman who struggling for the human rights, for the equal justice, equal opportunity, and equal dignity without discrimination. Her role in the United Nation’s Commission on Human Rights, her leadership of the Commission on Human Rights was the great achievement.
4. Eleanor Roosevelt’s personal sense of accomplishment with the finished declaration was unparalleled in her life.
5. Mrs. Roosevelt is a characteristic modesty woman. She is an astute, accomplished, and intelligent woman.
Exercise 6
1. In this passage I get many more information about Mrs. Roosevelt especially the early life of Mrs. Roosevelt which hasn’t been studied yet in the previous passage on page 48.
2. These two passages are similar in explaining about Mrs. Roosevelt life, but in passage 2 which its source is from encyclopedia entry give us more detail life of Mrs. Roosevelt.
3. If I were a writing a report on Mrs. Roosevelt’s life, the source that would be most useful for me is the source that is come from the encyclopedia entry. Because if I use the encyclopedia entry I will get many more information about Mrs. Roosevelt’s life. It gives us information that can’t be found in the web page, such as the early life of Mrs. Roosevelt’s life.
4. If I were a writing a report about the United Nations, the source that would be most useful for me is the source that is come from web page. Because in this passage explain more detail about United Nation in struggling for the human rights and fundamental freedoms for everyone in everywhere.
5. I think that the encyclopedia entry is easier to skim than the web page because the encyclopedia entry has good arrangement in its explanation.
Novi Setiowati [2201409126 ]
Exercise 5
1. Does this passage give you information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood?
No, it doesn’t.
2. What is most of this passage about?
The most of this passage is about the impression of Mrs. Roosevelt’s struggle for human rights.
3. Does this passage give a positive or a negative impression of Mrs. Roosevelt? How can tou tell?
Yes, it does. This passage give a positive impression of Mrs.Roosevelt because her struggle for human rights and her characteristics which is friendly, tireless worker, modesty, intelligent, etc. Even, Adlai Stevenson said that she would rather light a candle than curse the darkness.
4. What did Mrs. Roosevelt feel was her greatest accomplishment?
I guess she was glad and felt proud because her struggle was success.
5. What can you tell about Mrs. Roosevelt as a person?
Mrs. Roosevelt is a good figure to follow. She has given a important constribution in human rights that we can feel now.
Exercise 6
1. What information does the encyclopedia entry add to what you already know about Mrs. Roosevelt?
Mrs. Roosevelt’s childhood and life.
2. In which way are the two passage similar? In which ways are they different?
Two passage are similar in the person that they told, Mrs. Roosevelt. But, they’re different in the way of telling about Mrs. Roosevelt. The encyclopedia is more complete than the web page.
3. If you were writing a report on Mrs. Roosevelt’s life, which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
The encyclopedia entry is more useful because it told us more about Mrs. Roosevelt’s life, her childhood, her family, her carier, etc.
4. If you were writing a report about the United Nations, which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
The web page is more useful because it told more about Mrs. Roosevelt’s struggle for human rights in United Nations.
5. Which easier to skim, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
I guess the encyclopedia entry is easier to skim because it didn’t use many difficult terms and to tell you the truth, reading about someone’s life is more interesting for me.
1. Does this passage give you information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood?
No, it doesn’t.
2. What is most of this passage about?
The most of this passage is about the impression of Mrs. Roosevelt’s struggle for human rights.
3. Does this passage give a positive or a negative impression of Mrs. Roosevelt? How can tou tell?
Yes, it does. This passage give a positive impression of Mrs.Roosevelt because her struggle for human rights and her characteristics which is friendly, tireless worker, modesty, intelligent, etc. Even, Adlai Stevenson said that she would rather light a candle than curse the darkness.
4. What did Mrs. Roosevelt feel was her greatest accomplishment?
I guess she was glad and felt proud because her struggle was success.
5. What can you tell about Mrs. Roosevelt as a person?
Mrs. Roosevelt is a good figure to follow. She has given a important constribution in human rights that we can feel now.
Exercise 6
1. What information does the encyclopedia entry add to what you already know about Mrs. Roosevelt?
Mrs. Roosevelt’s childhood and life.
2. In which way are the two passage similar? In which ways are they different?
Two passage are similar in the person that they told, Mrs. Roosevelt. But, they’re different in the way of telling about Mrs. Roosevelt. The encyclopedia is more complete than the web page.
3. If you were writing a report on Mrs. Roosevelt’s life, which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
The encyclopedia entry is more useful because it told us more about Mrs. Roosevelt’s life, her childhood, her family, her carier, etc.
4. If you were writing a report about the United Nations, which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
The web page is more useful because it told more about Mrs. Roosevelt’s struggle for human rights in United Nations.
5. Which easier to skim, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
I guess the encyclopedia entry is easier to skim because it didn’t use many difficult terms and to tell you the truth, reading about someone’s life is more interesting for me.
Rio Luhung Pribadi [2201409116]
Exercises 5
1. No, it doesn’t give us any information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s Chilhood
2. Most of this passage are about Mrs. Roosevelt’s role in the commission of human rights
3. This passage only gives us a positive impression. Because there are many sentences about her good acts, like her humor sense and her intellect
4. Her greatest accomplishment is The Declaration of Human Rights
5. She is a great and humorist person.
Exercise 6
1. About her personal life, her childhood, and more details about her.
2. The two passages are similar because both of them are explain about Eleanor Roosevelt, but on the second passage explain about her personal life that doesn’t exist on the first passage.
3. The encyclopedia entry, because it gives us more details.
4. The web page, because if we use the encyclopedia entry it will need more spaces to explain.
5. Web page, because it provides us the general information about the object.
1. No, it doesn’t give us any information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s Chilhood
2. Most of this passage are about Mrs. Roosevelt’s role in the commission of human rights
3. This passage only gives us a positive impression. Because there are many sentences about her good acts, like her humor sense and her intellect
4. Her greatest accomplishment is The Declaration of Human Rights
5. She is a great and humorist person.
Exercise 6
1. About her personal life, her childhood, and more details about her.
2. The two passages are similar because both of them are explain about Eleanor Roosevelt, but on the second passage explain about her personal life that doesn’t exist on the first passage.
3. The encyclopedia entry, because it gives us more details.
4. The web page, because if we use the encyclopedia entry it will need more spaces to explain.
5. Web page, because it provides us the general information about the object.
Ainul Hufron [2201409051]
Exercise 5
1. No, this passage doesn’t give me any information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood.
2. This passage is most about Eleanor Roosevelt and her work on human rights at the United Nations.
3. This passage gives a positive impression of Mrs. Roosevelt. It’s written in this passage that she had good characteristics.
4. No, it wasn’t. what did Mrs. Roosevelt feel wasn’t her greatest accomplishment, but she regarded the Universal Declaration as her greatest accomplishment.
5. Through her work, Mrs. Roosevelt became widely esteemed as a person who both understood and felt the plight of the common man and woman.
Exercise 6
1. The encyclopedia entry gives more information such as about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood, her family and her personal independence.
2. The two passages are similar in giving information about Mrs. Roosevelt, but the first passage gives information about Mrs. Roosevelt’s work and the second passage gives more information about Mrs. Roosevelt’s life.
3. If I were writing a report on Mrs. Roosevelt’s life, the encyclopedia entry would be more useful, because it gave me more information about Mrs. Roosevelt’s life.
4. If I were writing a report about the United Nations, the web page would be more useful, because it gave me more information about Mrs. Roosevelt’s work at the United Nations.
5. The encyclopedia entry is easier to skim, because it tells about somebody’s life and has less number of pages.
1. No, this passage doesn’t give me any information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood.
2. This passage is most about Eleanor Roosevelt and her work on human rights at the United Nations.
3. This passage gives a positive impression of Mrs. Roosevelt. It’s written in this passage that she had good characteristics.
4. No, it wasn’t. what did Mrs. Roosevelt feel wasn’t her greatest accomplishment, but she regarded the Universal Declaration as her greatest accomplishment.
5. Through her work, Mrs. Roosevelt became widely esteemed as a person who both understood and felt the plight of the common man and woman.
Exercise 6
1. The encyclopedia entry gives more information such as about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood, her family and her personal independence.
2. The two passages are similar in giving information about Mrs. Roosevelt, but the first passage gives information about Mrs. Roosevelt’s work and the second passage gives more information about Mrs. Roosevelt’s life.
3. If I were writing a report on Mrs. Roosevelt’s life, the encyclopedia entry would be more useful, because it gave me more information about Mrs. Roosevelt’s life.
4. If I were writing a report about the United Nations, the web page would be more useful, because it gave me more information about Mrs. Roosevelt’s work at the United Nations.
5. The encyclopedia entry is easier to skim, because it tells about somebody’s life and has less number of pages.
Adam Ismail [2201409015]
Exercise 5
1. Does this passage give you information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood?
No, this passage doesn’t give me any information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood.
2. What is most of this passage about?
This passage mostly tells us about the great effort of Eleanor Roosevelt as the member of the United Nation’s Commission on Human Rights.
3. Does this passage give a positive or a negative impression of Mrs. Roosevelt? How can you tell?
Yes, it does. It is undoubted that Mrs. Roosevelt is one of the most influential members of the United Nation’s Commission on Human Rights. Despite of that, she is also depicted as hard working woman who is friendly, easygoing, and clever that she had won international respect and admiration all over the world.
4. What did Mrs. Roosevelt feel was her greatest accomplishment?
She felt that the establishment of Declaration of Human Right was her greatest accomplishment through her life.
5. What can you tell about Mrs. Roosevelt as a person?
Mrs. Roosevelt is one of the greatest women I’ve ever known. She is admired and respected for his role in declaring Declaration of Human Rights and her good personality as well. I think I am along with Adlai Stevenson to say that she is a kind of person that ought to light a candle than curse the darkness.
Exercise 6
1. What information does the encyclopedia entry add to what you already know about Mrs. Roosevelt?
The encyclopedia entry adds me abundant information about Mrs. Roosevelt’s entire life from her earlier childhood until she’s passed away.
2. In which ways are the two passages similar? In which ways are they different?
The both passages are similar in describing her personality and her achievement in United Nation’s Commission on Human Rights. However, they are different in the focus of the text. The first passage is focused on the role and the achievement of Mrs. Roosevelt in United Nation’s Commission on Human Rights. On the other hand, the second one is focused on Mrs. Roosevelt’s entire life.
3. If you were writing a report on Mrs. Roosevelt’s life, which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
If I were writing a report on Mrs. Roosevelt’s life, I would rather using the encyclopedia entry than the web page because the encyclopedia entry is more focused on Mrs. Roosevelt’s entire life.
4. If you were writing a report about the United Nations, which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
If I were writing a report about the United Nations, I prefer using the web page to the encyclopedia entry because the web page is more focused in explaining United Nations.
5. Which is easier to skim, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
If I compared the two passages I could say for sure that the encyclopedia entry is easier to skim than the web page because of its abundant information and the catchy layout.
Later on, if it comes to my own opinion comparing web page to encyclopedia entry, It is indeed that the encyclopedia entry is far easier to skim than the web page. I could say like that because I’ve experienced reading the web page is a SUCK. We have to give more focus while reading it because sometimes the layout of web page is not well set for reading and full with ads and other web widgets. Well, I don’t say that all web pages is that bad. However, skimming the encyclopedia entry is better, as the encyclopedia is certainly issued to help the reader to get information about something in ease.
1. Does this passage give you information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood?
No, this passage doesn’t give me any information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood.
2. What is most of this passage about?
This passage mostly tells us about the great effort of Eleanor Roosevelt as the member of the United Nation’s Commission on Human Rights.
3. Does this passage give a positive or a negative impression of Mrs. Roosevelt? How can you tell?
Yes, it does. It is undoubted that Mrs. Roosevelt is one of the most influential members of the United Nation’s Commission on Human Rights. Despite of that, she is also depicted as hard working woman who is friendly, easygoing, and clever that she had won international respect and admiration all over the world.
4. What did Mrs. Roosevelt feel was her greatest accomplishment?
She felt that the establishment of Declaration of Human Right was her greatest accomplishment through her life.
5. What can you tell about Mrs. Roosevelt as a person?
Mrs. Roosevelt is one of the greatest women I’ve ever known. She is admired and respected for his role in declaring Declaration of Human Rights and her good personality as well. I think I am along with Adlai Stevenson to say that she is a kind of person that ought to light a candle than curse the darkness.
Exercise 6
1. What information does the encyclopedia entry add to what you already know about Mrs. Roosevelt?
The encyclopedia entry adds me abundant information about Mrs. Roosevelt’s entire life from her earlier childhood until she’s passed away.
2. In which ways are the two passages similar? In which ways are they different?
The both passages are similar in describing her personality and her achievement in United Nation’s Commission on Human Rights. However, they are different in the focus of the text. The first passage is focused on the role and the achievement of Mrs. Roosevelt in United Nation’s Commission on Human Rights. On the other hand, the second one is focused on Mrs. Roosevelt’s entire life.
3. If you were writing a report on Mrs. Roosevelt’s life, which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
If I were writing a report on Mrs. Roosevelt’s life, I would rather using the encyclopedia entry than the web page because the encyclopedia entry is more focused on Mrs. Roosevelt’s entire life.
4. If you were writing a report about the United Nations, which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
If I were writing a report about the United Nations, I prefer using the web page to the encyclopedia entry because the web page is more focused in explaining United Nations.
5. Which is easier to skim, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why?
If I compared the two passages I could say for sure that the encyclopedia entry is easier to skim than the web page because of its abundant information and the catchy layout.
Later on, if it comes to my own opinion comparing web page to encyclopedia entry, It is indeed that the encyclopedia entry is far easier to skim than the web page. I could say like that because I’ve experienced reading the web page is a SUCK. We have to give more focus while reading it because sometimes the layout of web page is not well set for reading and full with ads and other web widgets. Well, I don’t say that all web pages is that bad. However, skimming the encyclopedia entry is better, as the encyclopedia is certainly issued to help the reader to get information about something in ease.
Rani Candrakirana P. [2201409060]
Exercise 5
1. No,it doesn’t.
2. This passage tell about The First Lady to Franklin D. Roosevelt , Eleanor Roosevelt , who won international respect and admiration because of her greatest legacy , the Declaration of Human Right. How she struggled for human right and fundamental freedoms for everyone everywhere.
3. This passage gives the possitive impressions of Mrs.Roosevelt. We can see how this passage tells about the kindness of Mrs.Roosevelt. Tell that she wan an astute , accomplished , and clever woman. It also tells how a whole world respect and admire her , because of her great accomplishment.
4. She felt happy , proud , and satisfied with what she had been reached.
5. Mrs.Roosevelt was a wonderful woman. She wan strenght , clever , visioner , and dedicated her life for struggling a human right. It meant that she was very care to the other person.
Exercise 6
1. The information include who Eleanor Roosevelt is , where she was born , who her parent is , how about her childhood , and the history of her life untill she made her accomplishment , The Declaration of Human Right.
2. The two pages are similar in part that tell about Eleanor Roosevelt ‘s accomplishment , The Declaration of Human Right. The different are the first passage only disscus about Eleanor’s accomplishment , but in the second passage we can get information about Eleanor’s life.
3. Second passage. Because it gives me more detail information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s life.
4. First passage. Because in the first passage , we can see the relation between part of Eleanor’s life and United State’s history.
5. Web page. Because it more focus on one issue that we have to understand.
1. No,it doesn’t.
2. This passage tell about The First Lady to Franklin D. Roosevelt , Eleanor Roosevelt , who won international respect and admiration because of her greatest legacy , the Declaration of Human Right. How she struggled for human right and fundamental freedoms for everyone everywhere.
3. This passage gives the possitive impressions of Mrs.Roosevelt. We can see how this passage tells about the kindness of Mrs.Roosevelt. Tell that she wan an astute , accomplished , and clever woman. It also tells how a whole world respect and admire her , because of her great accomplishment.
4. She felt happy , proud , and satisfied with what she had been reached.
5. Mrs.Roosevelt was a wonderful woman. She wan strenght , clever , visioner , and dedicated her life for struggling a human right. It meant that she was very care to the other person.
Exercise 6
1. The information include who Eleanor Roosevelt is , where she was born , who her parent is , how about her childhood , and the history of her life untill she made her accomplishment , The Declaration of Human Right.
2. The two pages are similar in part that tell about Eleanor Roosevelt ‘s accomplishment , The Declaration of Human Right. The different are the first passage only disscus about Eleanor’s accomplishment , but in the second passage we can get information about Eleanor’s life.
3. Second passage. Because it gives me more detail information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s life.
4. First passage. Because in the first passage , we can see the relation between part of Eleanor’s life and United State’s history.
5. Web page. Because it more focus on one issue that we have to understand.
Tuesday, 30 March 2010
Martina Hyastika Ramadhani [2201409077]
Exercise 5
- Does this passage give you information about Eleanor Roosevelt's childhood? -No, it doesn't.
- What is most of this passage about? -About Eleanor Roosevelt in her political activities and her organisation.
- Does this passage give a positive or a negative impression of Mrs. Roosevelt? How can you tell? -This passage gives a positive impression of Mrs. Roosevelt. We know a lot about Mrs. Eleanor's work in her organisations.
- What did Mrs. Roosevelt feel was her greatest accomplishment? -She felt satisfied and proud with her accomplishment for being the most influential member of the United Nation's Commision on Human Rights.
- What can you tell about Mrs. Roosevelt as a person? -She is an extraordinary woman. She can do her political activities very well.
- What information does the encyclopedia entry add to what you already know about Mrs. Roosevelt? -About Mrs. Roosevelt's childhood.
- In which ways are the two passages similar? In which ways are they different? -The two passages give us information about Mrs. Roosevelt. The first passage tells us about Mrs. Roosevelt's career, whereas the second passage tell us about Mrs. Roosevelt's childhood.
- If you were writing a report on Mrs. Roosevelt's life , which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why? -The encyclopedia entry, because it gives us more factual information about life biography of someone.
- If you were writing a report about the United Nations, which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why? -The web page, because the web page gives us more up to date information than encyclopedia.
- Which is easier to skim, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why? -The encyclopedia entry, because encyclopedia has outline in each paragraph.
Siti Mukhoyyaroh [2201406579]
Exercise 5
1. Does this passage give you information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood? No, it doesn’t.
2. What is most of this passage about? This passage is most about Mrs. Roosevelt’s carrier in United Nation.
3. Does this passage give a positive or negative impression of Mrs. Roosevelt? How can you tell?
This passage gives a positive impression of Mrs. Roosevelt. We can see from every paragraph of this passage that tells us about the positive side of Mrs. Roosevelt.
4. What did Mrs. Roosevelt feel was her greatest accomplishment? She regarded the Universal declaration as her greatest accomplishment.
5. What can you tell about Mrs. Roosevelt as a person? She is a great woman with wonderful personality and achievement.
Exercise 6
1. What information does the encyclopedia entry add to what you already know about Mrs. Roosevelt? The encyclopedia add information about Roosevelt biography, her childhood, her family
2. In which ways are the two passages similar? In which ways are they different? The two passages similar in given information about Roosevelt carrier. The first passage explains the Roosevelt biography in general, but second passage give information more detail in sequence.
3. If you are writing a report on Mrs. Roosevelt life, which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why? The encyclopedia entry would be more useful because it gives detail explanation about Roosevelt life start from she was born until she died.
4. If you are writing a report about the United Nations, which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why? The web page would be more useful because this passage tell us more about Roosevelt’s position in united Nation.
5. Which is easier to skim, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why? The encyclopedia entry is easier to skim because every paragraph in this passage is initiated by the bold title. For example, if we want to get information about Roosevelt’s family, you can search in the title of paragraph.
1. Does this passage give you information about Eleanor Roosevelt’s childhood? No, it doesn’t.
2. What is most of this passage about? This passage is most about Mrs. Roosevelt’s carrier in United Nation.
3. Does this passage give a positive or negative impression of Mrs. Roosevelt? How can you tell?
This passage gives a positive impression of Mrs. Roosevelt. We can see from every paragraph of this passage that tells us about the positive side of Mrs. Roosevelt.
4. What did Mrs. Roosevelt feel was her greatest accomplishment? She regarded the Universal declaration as her greatest accomplishment.
5. What can you tell about Mrs. Roosevelt as a person? She is a great woman with wonderful personality and achievement.
Exercise 6
1. What information does the encyclopedia entry add to what you already know about Mrs. Roosevelt? The encyclopedia add information about Roosevelt biography, her childhood, her family
2. In which ways are the two passages similar? In which ways are they different? The two passages similar in given information about Roosevelt carrier. The first passage explains the Roosevelt biography in general, but second passage give information more detail in sequence.
3. If you are writing a report on Mrs. Roosevelt life, which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why? The encyclopedia entry would be more useful because it gives detail explanation about Roosevelt life start from she was born until she died.
4. If you are writing a report about the United Nations, which source would be more useful, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why? The web page would be more useful because this passage tell us more about Roosevelt’s position in united Nation.
5. Which is easier to skim, the web page or the encyclopedia entry? Why? The encyclopedia entry is easier to skim because every paragraph in this passage is initiated by the bold title. For example, if we want to get information about Roosevelt’s family, you can search in the title of paragraph.
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